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Title: A poem to my wife
Description: I'm really going to try this time


Damar - November 23, 2009 06:12 AM (GMT)
I am really tired at this moment, so if it it doesn't rhyme or make sense, shut the hell up! But I miss her, and I type as I think, which are both, very slowly.

Everything we had
was taken away
By a bad economy
and politicians in toupees

Shit.

I was trying to be romantic.

Yesterday, the skies were blue,
A beautiful day
The breeze whisked though,
But it was cold as shit.

Gaaaaahhhh!

Don't doubt my love for you,
Don't doubt it ever,
For you know that I do
and will forever
Heather.

Shit, that was too many rhymes.

Roses are red,
Violets are blue
You in a bikini
Makes me cum on my shoe.

Crap!! I used to be good a this.

I miss holding you at night
I miss you being so near,
You would always hold me tight,
And snore in my ear.

Awwww, I give up.

I miss you lovebunny.

Shit, I forgot to capitalize that

I'm going to bed.

Heather - November 23, 2009 10:06 PM (GMT)
Awwww :wub:

boots73521 - November 23, 2009 10:32 PM (GMT)
The fact that you made the effort to try your hand at poetry, Damar, speaks volumes in regards to how you feel about Heather. I found your prosing to be rather cute as well as being emotional...

ForgetMeNot - November 23, 2009 11:32 PM (GMT)
Still cute. ^_^

trekslut69 - November 23, 2009 11:38 PM (GMT)
Damar, your adorable

and Heather your soo lucky


i hope all gets better soon and Damar can go back home where he belongs :hugs:

magentastorm - November 23, 2009 11:50 PM (GMT)
:yeahthat:

There isn't much more I can add; TS summed it up.

:hugs:

spocklet - November 24, 2009 01:00 AM (GMT)
From the heart, dude, from the heart. :thumbsup: :clap: :clap: :clap:

Damar - November 24, 2009 03:06 AM (GMT)
So you call him Thor
The Asgardian God of Thunder
But tis beneath the sheets,
He really wants to be under.

My lifemate, my soul,
You have to endure so much,
From taking care of the kids,
And not seeing my non-butt

But, I love you,
and we will get through this.
Because life without you
Is like falling through this place where I need an oxygen tank that was not properly filled.

SHIT!! I meant to say abyss.

We've been through so much,
Our lives interwined,
But wouldn't it be fun,
If we could travel back in time

To that moment,
Where we first met.
And we kissed each other
In the first minute.

Your hair was too bleached
And really long
But it was my heart you stole
And I knew it was gone.

Years later,
Your hold is still strong
As the thought of you in a bikini
Makes me long.

This sucks too.

I will try again next week.


boots73521 - November 24, 2009 03:23 AM (GMT)
Damar, you are beautiful in so many ways :clap:

ForgetMeNot - November 24, 2009 04:04 AM (GMT)
Actually, that's really nice, Damar. :)

magentastorm - November 24, 2009 04:08 AM (GMT)
Once again, others have beaten me to what I was going to say :pfft:

Damar, whether you think so or not, all your poems are incredibly sweet (even if they don't turn out they way you intended) and clearly so full of love for Heather. You are both very lucky to have each other.

:clap: :hugs:

boots73521 - November 24, 2009 04:16 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (magentastorm @ Nov 23 2009, 11:08 PM)
Once again, others have beaten me to what I was going to say :pffft:

Damar, whether you think so or not, all your poems are incredibly sweet (even if they don't turn out they way you intended) and clearly so full of love for Heather. You are both very lucky to have each other.

:clap: :hugs:

:yeahthat:

spocklet - November 24, 2009 10:40 AM (GMT)
:yeahthat: Ditto, likewise, fully agree, delete as appropriate dude. :hugs:



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